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Please.

Talk to me.

Tell me what shattered your heart inside.

Your heart is beating, yet, you're not alive.

You're hearing, yet, you're not listening.

You've become a black shadow.

Lifeless.

I can see the demons in your eyes.

Your eyes have glazed over.

Your life is coming to an end.

But yet, you're still healthy, still alive.

You smile to hide your pain.

But you're slowly dying inside.

You keep saying 'I'm fine', when I know you're not.

You tell me 'it's just a phase. Don't worry'

But I've never worried so much before.

You're like a leaf

Your beauty slowly withering away, unbeknownst to everyone around you.

Soon, you're going to fall from the tree, and hit the ground.

People will walk over you, ignoring how much pain they've caused your heart.

But hold on.

Please.

It gets better, I promise.

Your heart will beat once again.

I'm hoping for a sign of life.

I'm watching for those eyes to fill with joy, like they used to be.

I beg you with all my heart.

Stay alive.

For me.

Just some inspiration to anyone who's feeling like they're losing a battle.
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Dashieandluna Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Student General Artist
Wow this is so cool and sad
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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Dashieandluna Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Student General Artist
No prob
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alix5563 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
Amazing
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D
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8lifflefoot Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your style is so beautiful and fluent! I trully love how you captured the emotions in this piece. The message shines brightly and I hope it reaches the ones who need it
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Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your kind words :heart:
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hotohori2 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
I love it totally, this style is so interesting and it is so cool, great work, so sweet, i totally love it god dammit, yes! ^^
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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Eraezr Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know what its like to be in that position. The one who's speaking that it.
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hug 
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R41N80W-81TCH Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This makes me think of a friend...

I think she might have killed herself today, so... I broke down when I saw this...
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Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so sorry...I truly hope that she didn't kill herself. If you ever need to talk you can note me :hug:
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scarlette13 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
Itīs beautifully writte. You managed to make this poem very emotional and meaningful. Itīs great advice for everyone who suffers. Time heals the pain.
Also, great work of poetry. You wrote it very fluently and interestingly. I enjoyed reading:)
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your feedback, it's very appreciated :squee:
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JennahIsSoCoolLIKE Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This reminds me of the poetry I used to write.
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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RedeemerBobtail Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just love all these that you wrote.. But you gotta write something cheery sometime XD :heart:
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
One day I will...maybe xD I think writing sad poems is my guilty pleasure xD
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RedeemerBobtail Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

:D Okay then! cant wait to see one if ya ever decide to make one!

Ah, I see, you like the keep us wondering. XD

 

 *Prods with a stick* "like make one... sooon. I don wanna wait!"

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Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, I'm so evil for making you all wait *laughs evilly*
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RedeemerBobtail Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuu  Nuuu!
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xLuminaa Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it! :heart: Heart Love 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :la:
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xLuminaa Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OF COURSE! Please go on with those beautiful poems of yours! I am looking forward to see more! *-*
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, thank you :3 I'll be looking forward to writing more xD
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The-Silver-Rose599 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's was emotionally powerfull and it is beautiful :D
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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EmeraldGuardian-04 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod: Very emotional. This piece sent bolts of feels down my spine. :iconspazhugplz: You're amazing!
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Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :la:
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MasteroftheStorm Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist
A message many need.
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I hope this can help people :)
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MIM199 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow thats so touching
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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MIM199 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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