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Knock me down
But I will still rise

Shun me
But my hope never dies

Tell me I 'can't do it'
But I will prove you wrong

Break me down into pieces
But inside I'll remain strong

A fiery passion burns within me
One that you will not take away

Forever I will stand freely
And my fears, I will slay
 

My next poem on the 100 Themes Challenge: fav.me/d3eynl0 by Soft-Twilight

Thanks for reading :) Criticism is always welcome ^^
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:iconevil0verlady:
evil0verlady Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome!:thumbsup: :+fav:
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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:icontriinerg:
TriinErg Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This is simple but very good to read. 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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Hazelstar67 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
Your flow on this poem is very nice, I like how you rhymed, but it wasn't like you tried TOO hard (Ive seen poems ruined because they tried too hard to rhyme). Very nice!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much for your feedback :)
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:iconthefairieswhispers:
TheFairiesWhispers Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is very inspirational and motivational. I really like the flow of the poem, too. Wonderful job! :la:
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :hug:
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:iconthefairieswhispers:
TheFairiesWhispers Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome!
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:icondappeltail:
dappeltail Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wow this is really well written good job
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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:icondappeltail:
dappeltail Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Np :D
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:iconverkik:
verkik Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Wow, nice! I love the rhymes and how you managed to put such an inspirational meaning within such simple lines. 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :hug:
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:iconverkik:
verkik Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Np! :tighthug:
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:iconnotensmsk:
NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is quite simple and well worded. There isn't much of a meter but I don't think you were striving for it :) A good lesson put in an over all fine manner :nod:
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for your feedback :hug: It's much appreciated!
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:iconnotensmsk:
NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome :)
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:iconpyroflower20:
PyroFlower20 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Very nice! Clap 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :bow:
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:iconluciddesigngraphics:
LucidDesignGraphics Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Love it!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconwiccansalem:
wiccansalem Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
WOW
this is truly amazing work.
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug: I'm glad you liked it!
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:iconsakuracat12:
SakuraCat12 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That is so true. i feel that way every time i have to wrestle a guy at a meet
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, glad you liked it XD
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:iconsakuracat12:
SakuraCat12 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
yeah it was really good ad it means a lot too!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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:iconsakuracat12:
SakuraCat12 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You are very welcome!
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:iconalbel-venex:
Albel-Venex Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Wow this is so amazingly written...
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :glomp:
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:iconfearsofeverything:
fearsofeverything Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great work!!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconafter--life:
After--Life Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The POWER!

YYYYEEEEAAAAARRRRRGGGHHHHH!!!!@@@@@
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YEAAAHHHHdance 
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:iconafter--life:
After--Life Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol.
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oops, didn't mean to reply to you xD sorry ;w;
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:iconafter--life:
After--Life Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm offended, that'll cost you 9001 dA pts!Alucard Uh Oh 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
B-But... I only have 9000Sad dummy 
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:iconafter--life:
After--Life Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DANG IT!!!@@ If only...Rage 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, life is cruel [EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...?
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:iconi-guardian-l:
I-Guardian-l Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Great piece, such powerful words and expression. 
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it :heart:
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:icontaylorswift888:
TaylorSwift888 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Love it, it's really good and I love the detail and power you put into the words
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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:icontaylorswift888:
TaylorSwift888 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Your welcome! XD
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