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I'm not broken,
Just a little bent.

All those words you've spoken,
Just left me a little dent.

My heart isn't shattered,
It just has a crack.

Sore, bruised, and battered,
But my tears I hold back.

Please don't worry about me.
I'm fine, I swear.

I just want you to see,
That I'm still able to be repaired.

Even though I'm hurt, damaged, and weakened,
Even though I've felt so much pain.

It doesn't mean I'm truly beaten,
It just means that I'll need a little help again.










Next poem in the 100 Themes Challenge: fav.me/d3eynl0 by Soft-Twilight

Criticism is welcome :)
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:iconalix5563:
alix5563 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  New Deviant
Beautiful amazing whike completely trye
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :)
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rosenthia Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Student General Artist
This Is Beautiful I Love The Wording And Structure! :heart: A Gorgeous Piece With A Meaning Behind It A Message You Did An amazing Job Writing This You Have Quiet The Talent ^w^
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
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:iconrosenthia:
rosenthia Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Student General Artist
No Problem~ :heart: This Has Become One Of My Favourite Little Poems
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you liked it :hug:
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:iconrosenthia:
rosenthia Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Student General Artist
:hug: Its Very Well Written
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:iconambrosiasweettart:
AmbrosiaSweetTart Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
Wow! What came to mind when I finished was.....Amen! Love what this represents! Thanks for sharing!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i know that feeling all too well, pretending to be alright when you're dying on the inside. it sucks at best. I like the poem and i can relate to it, and i agree with your last line, sometimes we need help getting back up on our feet once more.
great work :clap:
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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:iconsolidmars:
SolidMars Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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:iconasherflo:
AsherFlo Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Professional Writer
I like you. Very much lol
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:huggle:
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:iconnanathatha:
NanaThatha Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! so sad but well summarized!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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:iconnanathatha:
NanaThatha Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love 
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:iconezziethenekolover:
ezziethenekolover Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So true... this poem speaks deep into my own feelings... It's so beautiful... :') It's the kind of feelings that some struggle with on occasion... and for some... everyday.
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you liked it <3
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ezziethenekolover Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Liked is an understatement my friend... :) I thought it deserves more then just 'like'
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my apologies xD Glad you 'loved' it! Is that more accurate? :giggle:
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:iconezziethenekolover:
ezziethenekolover Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha Yup. :P
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:iconricardo-orozco:
Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is so beautiful... its just great : )
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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lalalu24 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! i wish my work got this much love ^-^ this is really good!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, it was just luck for it to get this popular I guess xD And thank you ^^
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:iconlalalu24:
lalalu24 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you should check out some of my poetry :D i have a few that you might like :3 :P
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sure! I'll take a look :)
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:iconelectricpoodle:
ElectricPoodle Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!!!!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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ElectricPoodle Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your very welcome!
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THEpsycho44 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
wow this is awesome!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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LucyFaerie Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Very nice!
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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LucyFaerie Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
You're welcome.
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BadShirookami Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Very good..:D
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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BadShirookami Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
You're welcome, keep on doing such good work..:)
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dracoequine Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well done.. think I could quite agree with that right now
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you <3
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delitiaheiral Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was beautiful
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :hug:
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delitiaheiral Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your very welcome you have alot of talent =]
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you <3
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:iconbiovass:
BioVass Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
"Just a couple of broken ribs, it's nothing. To stop me... you got to smash my head or take my heart out."
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful :clap:
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myshkamoya Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Msn Heartbroken Emote sigh ... beautiful  
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:iconseas-of-emerald:
Seas-of-Emerald Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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myshkamoya Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
you're most welcome :)
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